My first gig flyer

[Dawn]

For web, at least. I was unsure about the white space, but I didnt want it to overdo it and end up with a cramped layout.
Any comments are appreciated

[Fearless_Shultz]

that looks really really good, I like it muchly!

Couple of small criticisms, I think the butch walker text is a little too close to the bands below, maybe just nudge it up a bit? also the text for the myspace addresses is a little hard to read imo, but then that could just be because I need new glasses

all in all cracking job though Dawnster!

[yorks.terrier]

I wouldnt reallly say the text is a bit too close together but it doesnt really stand out against the background apart from that it looks good.